Sooo, I thought of a title- 5 Short Days! Like it? Hate it? Love it? Let me know, cuz I'm not sure its the one. So um ya, Harry, Celeste, Here it is!!
Chapter 4: Harry
The first girl to come in was brunette, tall, and she looked mad! She stormed right in and demanded "Where is Louis Tomlinson?" It was brilliant! I think Louis was expecting a slightly more warm reception, but this bird was going to give him trouble and from the look on his face, he knew it! Ha! "I hope you know how much you have inconvenienced us! Probably not, you probably thing that it's a privilege for us to get to see you? Hmm?" She continued getting closer to him with each step. Out of the corner of my eye I could see Zayn and Niall practically double over with laughter. As the rest of the girls filed in, all with enormous back packs on, they seemed just as amused by their mate's performance as us. The smallest one tried to go up to her and calm her down, but she shot her one of the scariest looks I've ever seen from a girl. Man, these american girls! The rest of them seemed content to just let her run her course, so I sat back to enjoy the show! It wasn't often that a girl could make Louie squirm like she was. I smiled as I saw a mischievous look in the girl's eyes as she saw how much she was effecting him. Oh ya, this dame was definitely going to be the most difficult Louis had met in a while. I quickly counted the girls, only four. Oh, that could prove to be problematic. Then the door opened again and I caught my breath. Blue, blue eyes, blonde hair, thin body. But all of this, great as it was, isn't what caught my attention. I could tell she thought no one had noticed her yet because she seemed to take a steadying breath, and in that breath I saw some of the most breathtaking pain in her eyes. My heart squeezed, I wanted to look into those eyes forever to take away that insurmountable pain. She let out the breath and put on one of the most dazzling smile's I've seen. "Maddee!" She cried cheerfully, "Come on hun, this is the opportunity of a life time! Try not to make him wet himself!" She laughed a high tinkling laugh, and the girls joined her. Even the one terrorizing Louis paused, grumbled for a moment then gave into giggles that were completely different from what she had been yelling at Louis a moment ago, but she still glared at him. But what startled me was not the brunette's change of character, because you could still see her ever thought read across her face, but the blonde's. Had I imagined the pain? No, I couldn't and wouldn't invent something that heart wrenching. Even now as I listened to her laugh, there was an edge to it, faint but it was there. What terrible thing had happened to this girl to make her feel such pain? And why did she feel like she needed to hide it? Then and there I was determined to find out her secret and help her. My heart was in full agreement with this conclusion, and leaped with joy. But as I approached her that super annoying voice in my head whispered What if you don't want to know?
There won't always be a chapter from the boy's point of view, but I felt this one was necessary! Tell me what you thought!!
Sunday, September 2, 2012
Monday, August 27, 2012
One Direction: Chapter 3
Okay, again sorry for the delay in getting up the next chapter, but here it is!
Chapter 3: Celeste
As we walked up the trail, up to the boys,the look on Maddee's face almost made me smile, almost. Not much made me smile anymore, but I was trying. The rest of us had figured out who she was talking to long before she did, and frankly I'm surprised it took her so long to figure it out. I guess she never was as much of a fan girl as the rest of us. Anna kept yammering on. " I knew it! I so knew it!" she said as she let out a high pitched giggle, "As soon as he said he'd radio Paul, I knew it!" I turned around to see her doing a little jig, or as much of a jig as she could with a giant backpack dwarfing her small frame. Emma came up behind her and slammed a hand down on her shoulder. "Anna, Shut up." she said and smiled as she walked up to walk next to me. "Gee, you'd think she was still 14, not 18!" Emma said leaning into me and knocking me with her shoulder. I leaned away a little, not ready for the easy camaraderie yet. Emma seemed to see that and gave me a sad smile to show she understood. "I heard that!" yelled Anna from behind, where she was now torturing Kenzie with her foreknowledge of the boys we were going to go meet. I glanced up at Maddee again, and leaned over to Emma and whispered "Do you think she's freaked or pissed?" Emma looked up at our tall brunette friend, "Definitely freaked." Maddee turned around when she heard this, "I am so not freaked!" she said glaring at Emma, who just grinned cheekily back. "I am pissed that we are getting behind though! We are never going to make it to camp tonight!" she huffed and turned back around murmuring to herself about the stupidity of boys and hormones. But I knew what was going on through her head, she didn't need any more guys in her life, in fact she'd told me that she wanted to have her 19th birthday in the mountains specifically to get away from guys. So ya, she was freaked. Especially since she used to have a huge crush on the one and only Louis Tomlinson! That thought almost brought a wicked smile to my face, almost. I knew that even thought they were the boy band of my dreams, I wouldn't even notice now. I couldn't allow myself to notice. I decided then and there that I would not fall for any of One Direction.
We got the trailer and all stopped. Awkwardly we looked at each other, all thinking the same thing: Who goes in first? I expected Anna to jump at the opportunity, being the 1D die-hard among us, but she remained strangely quiet. Emma elbowed me in the side to get my attention, "I'm pretty sure she's freaking out." I turned to see what she was talking about, and saw Maddee staring at the door of the trailer. "Mads?" I asked her. "What did I do?" she whispered. "I screwed up again, I didn't even think, this is terrible, what was I thinking? Oh ya, I wasn't" She didn't take her eye's off of the the door the whole time she spoke. I knew it wasn't long until she shut down, not talking to anyone because of her insecurities. I turned to Kenzie, who knew her even better than I did and lifted my eyebrow in a question. She walked up to the other side of Maddee and looked at me "Keep her mad." she said. I smiled, that wasn't hard to do! "Maddee, these boys are keeping you from your perfect 19th birthday in the mountains with your best friends." Kenzie started out, she looked to me for support. "Louis pretty much ordered you to come here!" I said knowing she hates being told what to do, especially by boys. The thing that finally pushed her over though was Anna's comment. "I would do anything Louis told me to!" she said with a goofy grin on her face. "Thats IT!" Maddee exploded. "Just who does this Louis think he is? I'm gonna give him a pice of my mind!" She stormed towards the door, but just before knocking, she turned back to us, "Thank you," she said. Turning back to the door she knocked.
We waited for a moment before Emma suggested "Maybe you should knock again?" Maddee rolled her eyes and simply opened the door and stormed in. We all looked at each other and laughed. "Oh, she's back all right!" Kenzie said. Anna looked after Maddee "I just hope she'e not planning on hurting them!" The girls all laughed and followed Maddee into the trailer. I stayed back. Was I really ready for this? Thinking about it a great hole began to eat at my chest. It kept getting bigger and bigger. No! I would not let it drag me down again! I'd been down that road before, so I pasted on the best smile I could and joined my friends in the trailer, ready for a change.
Soo very sorry about the delay!! Thank you for being so patient! The next chapter will be from Harry's point of view just cuz i want you to get his reaction to Celeste. It will be short though sorry! It shouldn't take as long though! Thank you for waiting and reading!! Leave comments and suggestions if you have any!
Chapter 3: Celeste
As we walked up the trail, up to the boys,the look on Maddee's face almost made me smile, almost. Not much made me smile anymore, but I was trying. The rest of us had figured out who she was talking to long before she did, and frankly I'm surprised it took her so long to figure it out. I guess she never was as much of a fan girl as the rest of us. Anna kept yammering on. " I knew it! I so knew it!" she said as she let out a high pitched giggle, "As soon as he said he'd radio Paul, I knew it!" I turned around to see her doing a little jig, or as much of a jig as she could with a giant backpack dwarfing her small frame. Emma came up behind her and slammed a hand down on her shoulder. "Anna, Shut up." she said and smiled as she walked up to walk next to me. "Gee, you'd think she was still 14, not 18!" Emma said leaning into me and knocking me with her shoulder. I leaned away a little, not ready for the easy camaraderie yet. Emma seemed to see that and gave me a sad smile to show she understood. "I heard that!" yelled Anna from behind, where she was now torturing Kenzie with her foreknowledge of the boys we were going to go meet. I glanced up at Maddee again, and leaned over to Emma and whispered "Do you think she's freaked or pissed?" Emma looked up at our tall brunette friend, "Definitely freaked." Maddee turned around when she heard this, "I am so not freaked!" she said glaring at Emma, who just grinned cheekily back. "I am pissed that we are getting behind though! We are never going to make it to camp tonight!" she huffed and turned back around murmuring to herself about the stupidity of boys and hormones. But I knew what was going on through her head, she didn't need any more guys in her life, in fact she'd told me that she wanted to have her 19th birthday in the mountains specifically to get away from guys. So ya, she was freaked. Especially since she used to have a huge crush on the one and only Louis Tomlinson! That thought almost brought a wicked smile to my face, almost. I knew that even thought they were the boy band of my dreams, I wouldn't even notice now. I couldn't allow myself to notice. I decided then and there that I would not fall for any of One Direction.
We got the trailer and all stopped. Awkwardly we looked at each other, all thinking the same thing: Who goes in first? I expected Anna to jump at the opportunity, being the 1D die-hard among us, but she remained strangely quiet. Emma elbowed me in the side to get my attention, "I'm pretty sure she's freaking out." I turned to see what she was talking about, and saw Maddee staring at the door of the trailer. "Mads?" I asked her. "What did I do?" she whispered. "I screwed up again, I didn't even think, this is terrible, what was I thinking? Oh ya, I wasn't" She didn't take her eye's off of the the door the whole time she spoke. I knew it wasn't long until she shut down, not talking to anyone because of her insecurities. I turned to Kenzie, who knew her even better than I did and lifted my eyebrow in a question. She walked up to the other side of Maddee and looked at me "Keep her mad." she said. I smiled, that wasn't hard to do! "Maddee, these boys are keeping you from your perfect 19th birthday in the mountains with your best friends." Kenzie started out, she looked to me for support. "Louis pretty much ordered you to come here!" I said knowing she hates being told what to do, especially by boys. The thing that finally pushed her over though was Anna's comment. "I would do anything Louis told me to!" she said with a goofy grin on her face. "Thats IT!" Maddee exploded. "Just who does this Louis think he is? I'm gonna give him a pice of my mind!" She stormed towards the door, but just before knocking, she turned back to us, "Thank you," she said. Turning back to the door she knocked.
We waited for a moment before Emma suggested "Maybe you should knock again?" Maddee rolled her eyes and simply opened the door and stormed in. We all looked at each other and laughed. "Oh, she's back all right!" Kenzie said. Anna looked after Maddee "I just hope she'e not planning on hurting them!" The girls all laughed and followed Maddee into the trailer. I stayed back. Was I really ready for this? Thinking about it a great hole began to eat at my chest. It kept getting bigger and bigger. No! I would not let it drag me down again! I'd been down that road before, so I pasted on the best smile I could and joined my friends in the trailer, ready for a change.
Soo very sorry about the delay!! Thank you for being so patient! The next chapter will be from Harry's point of view just cuz i want you to get his reaction to Celeste. It will be short though sorry! It shouldn't take as long though! Thank you for waiting and reading!! Leave comments and suggestions if you have any!
Wednesday, August 1, 2012
One Direction: Chapter 2
Okay, here is the second chapter, from Louis's point of view. Sorry it took me so long to get it up. Also, if you guys have any good title ideas leave them in a comment, cuz I hate not having a title!
Chapter 2: Louis
I got off the radio and looked behind me. Niall, Liam, and Zayn were still laughing at Paul tied up in his chair, and I cracked a smile. It was one of my best pranks yet, and I was surprised it went off so well. I noticed Harry staring at me. "Um, Louis, what did you just do man?" he said quirking up his eyebrow in question. At his question all the boys looked at me with the same question in their eyes, well except for Paul, he just glared at me. Gee, if looks could kill! But I understood where they were coming from. Just last week our car had almost been rolled over because of all the girls that had figured out it was ours! "Come on guys! There's just a couple of them!" I said grinning. "He just wants to see "the most difficult girl he'll ever meet!" Harry said wickedly. Niall laughed at that. In fact they all laughed at that, even Paul! "Aw, come off it!" I groaned. Liam stopped laughing first. "But now that they know we're here, the whole world will know!" We all stopped laughing, this was serious now. Niall pulled out his phone, "I'll check," He said looking down at the screen of his smart phone. We watched him as his eyebrows scrunched up in frustration. "I don't have any service, none whatsoever!" We all pulled out our phones and check ours. No one had service. "How did we not notice this before?" Zayn asked. "'Cuz we're kinda stupid." Liam said, "At least that takes care of the whole world knowing where we are!" We all breathed a sigh of relief, we were safe. Well, at least from the girls of the world. However, he had just invited some right to their front door, so to speak. "She didn't even know who I was, she's not a fan, just a normal girl!" I said "Come on, she's just a normal girl, the rest of them are probably normal too!" I could see the guys warming up to the idea of meeting non fangirls. To be honest it had been some time since we had. Someone knocked on the door to the trailer. "They're here!" I said giddily. we all then started adjusting our clothes, Zayn ran to a mirror to check his hair, Niall grabbed his snap-back and shoved it on his head then took it off and combed through his hair then put it back on again. Harry kept running his finger nervously through his curly hair. Liam and I just stood there. "What just happened to our friends?" Liam looked over at me and caught me straitening my shirt. "Ha, we haven't been this nervous to meet girls in a long time!" We smiled at each other as the door opened.
Sorry its so short guys, I just have the hardest time writing from their point of view. So whenever there is a chapter from the boy's point of view it'll be kinda short! Next point of view is Celeste!
Chapter 2: Louis
I got off the radio and looked behind me. Niall, Liam, and Zayn were still laughing at Paul tied up in his chair, and I cracked a smile. It was one of my best pranks yet, and I was surprised it went off so well. I noticed Harry staring at me. "Um, Louis, what did you just do man?" he said quirking up his eyebrow in question. At his question all the boys looked at me with the same question in their eyes, well except for Paul, he just glared at me. Gee, if looks could kill! But I understood where they were coming from. Just last week our car had almost been rolled over because of all the girls that had figured out it was ours! "Come on guys! There's just a couple of them!" I said grinning. "He just wants to see "the most difficult girl he'll ever meet!" Harry said wickedly. Niall laughed at that. In fact they all laughed at that, even Paul! "Aw, come off it!" I groaned. Liam stopped laughing first. "But now that they know we're here, the whole world will know!" We all stopped laughing, this was serious now. Niall pulled out his phone, "I'll check," He said looking down at the screen of his smart phone. We watched him as his eyebrows scrunched up in frustration. "I don't have any service, none whatsoever!" We all pulled out our phones and check ours. No one had service. "How did we not notice this before?" Zayn asked. "'Cuz we're kinda stupid." Liam said, "At least that takes care of the whole world knowing where we are!" We all breathed a sigh of relief, we were safe. Well, at least from the girls of the world. However, he had just invited some right to their front door, so to speak. "She didn't even know who I was, she's not a fan, just a normal girl!" I said "Come on, she's just a normal girl, the rest of them are probably normal too!" I could see the guys warming up to the idea of meeting non fangirls. To be honest it had been some time since we had. Someone knocked on the door to the trailer. "They're here!" I said giddily. we all then started adjusting our clothes, Zayn ran to a mirror to check his hair, Niall grabbed his snap-back and shoved it on his head then took it off and combed through his hair then put it back on again. Harry kept running his finger nervously through his curly hair. Liam and I just stood there. "What just happened to our friends?" Liam looked over at me and caught me straitening my shirt. "Ha, we haven't been this nervous to meet girls in a long time!" We smiled at each other as the door opened.
Sorry its so short guys, I just have the hardest time writing from their point of view. So whenever there is a chapter from the boy's point of view it'll be kinda short! Next point of view is Celeste!
Sunday, July 15, 2012
One Direction: Chapter 1
Okay, for people who are following me who are not Emma, Celeste, Kenzie, or Anna, this is a fanfic that I am writing for the afore mentioned girls about One Direction. So, enjoy, hate, or just don't read! Also, for the people who decide to read this, I have provided a sound track to read it by. This is what I listen to while I'm writing, so go ahead, press play and start reading! :)
Chapter 1: Maddee
I couldn't help but smile at the the trees as we hiked up into the trees, this was going to be the perfect birthday. Away from the city, school, parents, boys! The past month I had seen enough drama to last me a life time, an already I could feel the soundtrack of the forest soothing my frayed nerves as only natural music can. I turned to smile back at my girls. Celeste, blonde, thin and gorgeous even with out makeup that i had banned for this trip, was right behind me. She wasn't even struggling underneath her large backpack packed with only the essentials for five days in the mountains. But her shoulders drooped with the weight of something even heavier. I instantly became even more grateful for this trip, it would be just as good for her as it was for me. Behind her was the carrot top of Emma. I could practically see her bouncing with excitement, her heavy pack the only thing keeping her on the ground. I knew that the only reason that I was in the lead was because I knew the way. I smiled at that thought and looked past her to see Kenzie kneeling on the side of the path picking up what I think is a wild onion, probably for her dinner tonight. Then, lagging a little behind, was Anna. Her wispy brown hair whipping around her oval face, framing her deep brown eyes. I hope she does well on this trip, its not really her scene. I turned back to face the forest, and the week, and the adventure! "Shoot!" the screech came from the back of the group, Anna. I sighed and yelled over my shoulder "What is it?"
"I have no service!"
I looked behind me to see her jumping up and down waving her expensive cell phone around in the air. I ran up to her and grabbed her hand before she could damage the phone, or anything else. "Anna, hon, I told you not to bring your phone! It's completely useless out here, especially with at&t!" I said rolling my eyes. I gave her back her phone and dug the map out of my pocket. "Well, where are we?" Emma said leaning over my shoulder, looking at the map. I found our position and frowned, "Not nearly far enough." I said turning towards the girls "We need to pick up the pace, kay? I promise as soon as we get there there's a a small lake that we can swim in and wash off a little." At the mention of the lake they all visibly perked up, I smiled too. A swim sounded amazing right now, the humid washington air making everything so muggy and thick. I was glad I had decided to wear my short shorts. I had debated wearing them, but i figured there wouldn't be any guys there so there really was nothing to worry about, and I was really appreciating that decision now.
We all started back up the trail with renewed vigor. Even Celeste seemed to have a less hopeless air about her. I knew that this would help her, maybe not cure her of her hurts, but definitely help. Much more than staying in a cooped up city full of memories. I was so occupied with my thoughts I almost missed the giant roadblock (trail block?) with two of the most stereotypical body guards, um, well guarding it! I mean these guys were huge! The juggernauts of all body guards. I heard Anna give a little eep of shock as she saw them, and heard Kenzie trip over her feet into Emma. We sat there for a moment, both parties sizing up the other. Then one of the guards stepped forward and cleared his throat, "Um, I have to ask you to leave the vicinity" he said, and then folded his arms to make him appear larger. I stood there, just stood there. What the crap where they doing here? They belonged in the city! This was the kind of controlling I was trying to get away from, if at least for a week! I stood up straighter than before and stepped forward. "Why?" I heard Celeste gasp a little as I said it, and I toned down the cheekyness a little, I just a little ruffled to find them in my self appointed santuary. So I continued calmly "This is a trail owned by the state of Washington, and unless you are a ranger who is employed by the state, then you have no jurisdiction to tell us that we need to leave." I smiled as sweetly as I could because he looked so confused and frustrated i was afraid he would hit me! "If you just let us through, we only want to continue on the trail. Or you could take us to a higher authority and have him explain the situation." I folded my arms, mimicking his stance. He looked back at the other guard, "Go ahead and radio Paul, he should know what to do." Anna gasped a little at the name, I looked over my shoulder at her, and she just shrugged it off. "It can't possible be who I think it is, don't worry about it." The other guard reached for his radio and said into the little black box, "Paul, we have some girls out here who refuse to leave. What should we do?" A crackling voice answered "What?! Girls?! How the crap do they keep finding us? Send them away, Do what ever you have to, no fan girls today, I promised them." By this point I was thoroughly confused. Fan girls? Finding them? Who exactly was on this trail? Johnny Depp? A Hemsworth brother? I looked around at the girls, they seemed just as confused, except for Anna, she had gone white and her hands were shaking. Seeing our reactions the guard responded to Paul. "Um, I don't think they are fan girls, they just want to keep going on the trail. It is a popular backpacking trail, and they are all packed up for what looks about five days." I looked at him appraisingly, impressive guessing the days like that! I wonder if he was a backpacker, and if he had ever done this trail before. He clicked off, and waited for Paul's reply. "I don't care if they ar....." he trailed off as their was a commotion on the other side off the line. Body guard 2 tried to contact them, but the line was still open. It sounded like Paul was being attacked! Then the other line went quiet and a smooth voice came over the other end, thick with laughter and a british accent. "Sorry about that! This is Louis Tomlinson, and Paul is currently out of commission!" He broke down in laughter, and I heard more laughter in the background along with Paul yelling at them to "Get him out of this chair right now, or so help him he would cancel the music video then and there" The laughing faded away and Louis came back on, "Sorry again, who am I speaking to?" and he clicked off. Instinctively I lunged forward and grabbed the radio. "This is one of the most difficult girls you will ever meet Louis, I am a backpacker and your apes here won't let my friends and me continue on the trail, and I would appreciate it if I could talk to someone in charge, thank you!" Ok, so it was a little snippy, but we were wasting time! We wouldn't make it to camp if we took much longer! The radio crackled in my hand, "You don't know who I am do you?" he said sounding incredulous. I was about to respond with a biting remark about how conceded he sounded, then I thought about it. Louis Tomlinson, it sounded familiar. I looked behind me at the completely shocked faces of my friends. Oh. My. Gosh. Crap. I decided to go along with the not knowing who he was. "Why should I? Are you in charge or something?"
"I guess you could say that" I could almost picture a cheeky grin on his face as he said it. "Well why don't you let us through, and we will be out of your hair!" I said. "I don't think so, you are going to come to me and we are going to have a little chat." I heard Anna squeak behind me. Great, this was just so fantastic I could hardly help but roll my eyes as the guards ushered us behind the trail block onto the trail behind it.
Okay, so there's the first chapter! I hope you liked it and are happy with how I portrayed you if you are in it! While you're waiting for the next chapter (which will be from Louis point of view, spoilers!:) you can read the rest of the stuff on my blog, its just a story, a few essays, and the beginning of another story, Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Maddee
I couldn't help but smile at the the trees as we hiked up into the trees, this was going to be the perfect birthday. Away from the city, school, parents, boys! The past month I had seen enough drama to last me a life time, an already I could feel the soundtrack of the forest soothing my frayed nerves as only natural music can. I turned to smile back at my girls. Celeste, blonde, thin and gorgeous even with out makeup that i had banned for this trip, was right behind me. She wasn't even struggling underneath her large backpack packed with only the essentials for five days in the mountains. But her shoulders drooped with the weight of something even heavier. I instantly became even more grateful for this trip, it would be just as good for her as it was for me. Behind her was the carrot top of Emma. I could practically see her bouncing with excitement, her heavy pack the only thing keeping her on the ground. I knew that the only reason that I was in the lead was because I knew the way. I smiled at that thought and looked past her to see Kenzie kneeling on the side of the path picking up what I think is a wild onion, probably for her dinner tonight. Then, lagging a little behind, was Anna. Her wispy brown hair whipping around her oval face, framing her deep brown eyes. I hope she does well on this trip, its not really her scene. I turned back to face the forest, and the week, and the adventure! "Shoot!" the screech came from the back of the group, Anna. I sighed and yelled over my shoulder "What is it?"
"I have no service!"
I looked behind me to see her jumping up and down waving her expensive cell phone around in the air. I ran up to her and grabbed her hand before she could damage the phone, or anything else. "Anna, hon, I told you not to bring your phone! It's completely useless out here, especially with at&t!" I said rolling my eyes. I gave her back her phone and dug the map out of my pocket. "Well, where are we?" Emma said leaning over my shoulder, looking at the map. I found our position and frowned, "Not nearly far enough." I said turning towards the girls "We need to pick up the pace, kay? I promise as soon as we get there there's a a small lake that we can swim in and wash off a little." At the mention of the lake they all visibly perked up, I smiled too. A swim sounded amazing right now, the humid washington air making everything so muggy and thick. I was glad I had decided to wear my short shorts. I had debated wearing them, but i figured there wouldn't be any guys there so there really was nothing to worry about, and I was really appreciating that decision now.
We all started back up the trail with renewed vigor. Even Celeste seemed to have a less hopeless air about her. I knew that this would help her, maybe not cure her of her hurts, but definitely help. Much more than staying in a cooped up city full of memories. I was so occupied with my thoughts I almost missed the giant roadblock (trail block?) with two of the most stereotypical body guards, um, well guarding it! I mean these guys were huge! The juggernauts of all body guards. I heard Anna give a little eep of shock as she saw them, and heard Kenzie trip over her feet into Emma. We sat there for a moment, both parties sizing up the other. Then one of the guards stepped forward and cleared his throat, "Um, I have to ask you to leave the vicinity" he said, and then folded his arms to make him appear larger. I stood there, just stood there. What the crap where they doing here? They belonged in the city! This was the kind of controlling I was trying to get away from, if at least for a week! I stood up straighter than before and stepped forward. "Why?" I heard Celeste gasp a little as I said it, and I toned down the cheekyness a little, I just a little ruffled to find them in my self appointed santuary. So I continued calmly "This is a trail owned by the state of Washington, and unless you are a ranger who is employed by the state, then you have no jurisdiction to tell us that we need to leave." I smiled as sweetly as I could because he looked so confused and frustrated i was afraid he would hit me! "If you just let us through, we only want to continue on the trail. Or you could take us to a higher authority and have him explain the situation." I folded my arms, mimicking his stance. He looked back at the other guard, "Go ahead and radio Paul, he should know what to do." Anna gasped a little at the name, I looked over my shoulder at her, and she just shrugged it off. "It can't possible be who I think it is, don't worry about it." The other guard reached for his radio and said into the little black box, "Paul, we have some girls out here who refuse to leave. What should we do?" A crackling voice answered "What?! Girls?! How the crap do they keep finding us? Send them away, Do what ever you have to, no fan girls today, I promised them." By this point I was thoroughly confused. Fan girls? Finding them? Who exactly was on this trail? Johnny Depp? A Hemsworth brother? I looked around at the girls, they seemed just as confused, except for Anna, she had gone white and her hands were shaking. Seeing our reactions the guard responded to Paul. "Um, I don't think they are fan girls, they just want to keep going on the trail. It is a popular backpacking trail, and they are all packed up for what looks about five days." I looked at him appraisingly, impressive guessing the days like that! I wonder if he was a backpacker, and if he had ever done this trail before. He clicked off, and waited for Paul's reply. "I don't care if they ar....." he trailed off as their was a commotion on the other side off the line. Body guard 2 tried to contact them, but the line was still open. It sounded like Paul was being attacked! Then the other line went quiet and a smooth voice came over the other end, thick with laughter and a british accent. "Sorry about that! This is Louis Tomlinson, and Paul is currently out of commission!" He broke down in laughter, and I heard more laughter in the background along with Paul yelling at them to "Get him out of this chair right now, or so help him he would cancel the music video then and there" The laughing faded away and Louis came back on, "Sorry again, who am I speaking to?" and he clicked off. Instinctively I lunged forward and grabbed the radio. "This is one of the most difficult girls you will ever meet Louis, I am a backpacker and your apes here won't let my friends and me continue on the trail, and I would appreciate it if I could talk to someone in charge, thank you!" Ok, so it was a little snippy, but we were wasting time! We wouldn't make it to camp if we took much longer! The radio crackled in my hand, "You don't know who I am do you?" he said sounding incredulous. I was about to respond with a biting remark about how conceded he sounded, then I thought about it. Louis Tomlinson, it sounded familiar. I looked behind me at the completely shocked faces of my friends. Oh. My. Gosh. Crap. I decided to go along with the not knowing who he was. "Why should I? Are you in charge or something?"
"I guess you could say that" I could almost picture a cheeky grin on his face as he said it. "Well why don't you let us through, and we will be out of your hair!" I said. "I don't think so, you are going to come to me and we are going to have a little chat." I heard Anna squeak behind me. Great, this was just so fantastic I could hardly help but roll my eyes as the guards ushered us behind the trail block onto the trail behind it.
Okay, so there's the first chapter! I hope you liked it and are happy with how I portrayed you if you are in it! While you're waiting for the next chapter (which will be from Louis point of view, spoilers!:) you can read the rest of the stuff on my blog, its just a story, a few essays, and the beginning of another story, Enjoy!
Sunday, April 1, 2012
Focus Tips!
Today I had to watch general conference with my family. Usually I enjoy this opportunity, but today I found myself unfathomably bored! Of course, there were some moments where I was truly intrigued, but for the most part I found myself wishing I could be somewhere else. I was stuck. I knew that this was important not only to me, but to my parents as well. I, being the eldest, need to set an example to my younger siblings. Sure I have lots of practice with boring lectures, I have them in school all the time. But this was important to me and I needed away to sustain my attention so that I could gather at least a few lessons from eight hours of conference. So, I came up with a few tips for myself on staying focused when bored out of your mind. Weather in school or in church.
Tip #1: Write stuff down- Even though you're bored, there has to be a few phrases or ideas that catch your attention. Write them down. Then, as the talk goes on, you can find things that tie to that phrase or idea. You could even carry that phrase or idea over to the next talk and listen intently to that one to see if it has any similarities.
Tip #2: Look for Humor-Most speakers try to put at least a little humor into their talks or lectures to help people pay attention. Some, unfortunately, do not. For example, I have a teacher at school who, if he were reading out of the textbook it would probably be more entertaining, and I would most likely learn more. More often than not I find myself falling asleep in his class, so to help me focus, I look for unintentional humor. He may have a slip of the tongue and say something that he did not mean, or maybe something he says sounds like something else. It is easy to find these little humors if you are listening, and then, well your listening. One piece of advice I would give with this tip though, is that you might not want to laugh out loud! :)
Tip #3: See if They Use Anything You Had Previous Knowledge of- This is a tip I use frequently during school. Although they seem diverse, a lot of the subjects they teach us during school all connect in one way or another. Math and Science of course, but also Math and English. Even English and a foreign language you may be taking. Looking for, and finding these similarities can hold your attention for hours on end no matter how the teacher's voice may drone on and on!
These are just a few tips I use to keep myself awake during school or during any other boring lecture I need to listen to. Granted that it does take work to pay attention, I hope these tips will help you as they have helped me. Of course, you could always just sleep through everything, but where's the fun in that?
Tip #1: Write stuff down- Even though you're bored, there has to be a few phrases or ideas that catch your attention. Write them down. Then, as the talk goes on, you can find things that tie to that phrase or idea. You could even carry that phrase or idea over to the next talk and listen intently to that one to see if it has any similarities.
Tip #2: Look for Humor-Most speakers try to put at least a little humor into their talks or lectures to help people pay attention. Some, unfortunately, do not. For example, I have a teacher at school who, if he were reading out of the textbook it would probably be more entertaining, and I would most likely learn more. More often than not I find myself falling asleep in his class, so to help me focus, I look for unintentional humor. He may have a slip of the tongue and say something that he did not mean, or maybe something he says sounds like something else. It is easy to find these little humors if you are listening, and then, well your listening. One piece of advice I would give with this tip though, is that you might not want to laugh out loud! :)
Tip #3: See if They Use Anything You Had Previous Knowledge of- This is a tip I use frequently during school. Although they seem diverse, a lot of the subjects they teach us during school all connect in one way or another. Math and Science of course, but also Math and English. Even English and a foreign language you may be taking. Looking for, and finding these similarities can hold your attention for hours on end no matter how the teacher's voice may drone on and on!
These are just a few tips I use to keep myself awake during school or during any other boring lecture I need to listen to. Granted that it does take work to pay attention, I hope these tips will help you as they have helped me. Of course, you could always just sleep through everything, but where's the fun in that?
Sunday, March 11, 2012
Blog Post #20: Moon Spell
Continuation of Blog Post #19
Aden stared at the moon as it rose over the city skyline, and as the moonlight hit him something strange happened. Haley blinked repeatedly. No, it couldn't be real! But there it was she saw it with her own eyes. The moonlight was gathering around Aden and sparkling as it turned from light to a dust that clung to him like a magnet. He stared at the dust with a look of longing lingering on his face. He ran his fingers through what remained in the air and made patterns. Glittering, beautiful, out of this world designs in midair with this moonlight turned glitter. Haley watch this with a look of awe on her face, and sunk to the ground. She knew it, she had gone completely off the deep end with this one! Here she was hallucinating in an alley that a boy from her school was taking moonlight and turning it into some kind of... pixie dust? Haley laughed at the incredulous notion, what did it matter? It was just a hallucination. But her laugh had drawn his attention. He seemed confused for a moment and looked at her with no recognition in his eyes. He peered at her for several more seconds as the dust continued to swirl and collect around him. Finally he opened his mouth and said, "Haley?" But his voice was different. It was deeper and had more sustenance, and had and unearthly ring to it that echoed in her ears. It was beautiful. That is when she decided that this was not really Aden Moonsinger, she must have slipped in one of the many disgusting puddles that were numerous around here, and hit her head and she was having a most wonderful dream in which a boy from her school was much more than what he seemed. She was so sure of this that she nodded at him and stood up. When she confirmed that she was in fact Haley, Aden grew panicked. "Crap!" he said not quite looking at her. She stepped forward. "What's wrong?" she asked. She had a sudden desire to touch the swirling, glittering dust. Aden backed away, "You weren't supposed to stay conscious, how can you look at it and still be awake?" Haley laughed, "I'm not!" she said "This is all a dream, how else could any of this be possible?" She grew nervous at the look he gave her. But it had to be a dream because the only alternative was, NO, she was not crazy! Was she? Haley began to second guess herself and each breath became more and more panicked. "Haley," someone was calling her name from far away she focused on that to bring her from the edge of a mental meltdown. "Haley, you need to calm down." It was Aden, he was still standing there surrounded by moon dust. Seeing the moon dust only caused her to become more distraught. "I'm sorry Haley," Aden said as he started to cup some of the dust into his hand "But maybe this might help you calm down" He brought the hand with the dust to his mouth and blew. Haley couln't let that dust touch her, because what if it was real? Would that make her crazy? She decided she didn't want to find out and lunged to the side to avoid it touching her, but in the darkness of the alley, the wall was much closer than it appeared. Haley heard a crack and went down on the pavement. She laid there for a moment until a white hot nail of pain drove itself into her temple. The pain turned her whole world white, then black and she was gone.
Aden stared at the moon as it rose over the city skyline, and as the moonlight hit him something strange happened. Haley blinked repeatedly. No, it couldn't be real! But there it was she saw it with her own eyes. The moonlight was gathering around Aden and sparkling as it turned from light to a dust that clung to him like a magnet. He stared at the dust with a look of longing lingering on his face. He ran his fingers through what remained in the air and made patterns. Glittering, beautiful, out of this world designs in midair with this moonlight turned glitter. Haley watch this with a look of awe on her face, and sunk to the ground. She knew it, she had gone completely off the deep end with this one! Here she was hallucinating in an alley that a boy from her school was taking moonlight and turning it into some kind of... pixie dust? Haley laughed at the incredulous notion, what did it matter? It was just a hallucination. But her laugh had drawn his attention. He seemed confused for a moment and looked at her with no recognition in his eyes. He peered at her for several more seconds as the dust continued to swirl and collect around him. Finally he opened his mouth and said, "Haley?" But his voice was different. It was deeper and had more sustenance, and had and unearthly ring to it that echoed in her ears. It was beautiful. That is when she decided that this was not really Aden Moonsinger, she must have slipped in one of the many disgusting puddles that were numerous around here, and hit her head and she was having a most wonderful dream in which a boy from her school was much more than what he seemed. She was so sure of this that she nodded at him and stood up. When she confirmed that she was in fact Haley, Aden grew panicked. "Crap!" he said not quite looking at her. She stepped forward. "What's wrong?" she asked. She had a sudden desire to touch the swirling, glittering dust. Aden backed away, "You weren't supposed to stay conscious, how can you look at it and still be awake?" Haley laughed, "I'm not!" she said "This is all a dream, how else could any of this be possible?" She grew nervous at the look he gave her. But it had to be a dream because the only alternative was, NO, she was not crazy! Was she? Haley began to second guess herself and each breath became more and more panicked. "Haley," someone was calling her name from far away she focused on that to bring her from the edge of a mental meltdown. "Haley, you need to calm down." It was Aden, he was still standing there surrounded by moon dust. Seeing the moon dust only caused her to become more distraught. "I'm sorry Haley," Aden said as he started to cup some of the dust into his hand "But maybe this might help you calm down" He brought the hand with the dust to his mouth and blew. Haley couln't let that dust touch her, because what if it was real? Would that make her crazy? She decided she didn't want to find out and lunged to the side to avoid it touching her, but in the darkness of the alley, the wall was much closer than it appeared. Haley heard a crack and went down on the pavement. She laid there for a moment until a white hot nail of pain drove itself into her temple. The pain turned her whole world white, then black and she was gone.
Sunday, February 26, 2012
Blog Post #19: What to do now...
This is a story I started some time ago that I thought I would revise so I could take it to a writer's conference.
Haley sat outside the school waiting for him. Aden had been in there for hours, and it was starting to get dark. She shouldn't bee here. She got up and started to walk home. When she turned the corner she saw him there in front of her. Impossible! Haley opened her mouth to yell at him, but stopped. Something in her wanted to follow him. So she stayed a couple of steps behind him the whole way through town and into a part of town that made her uncomfortable. Dark alleys lined these streets and the old buildings were covered with graffiti. When she thought she saw someone lurking in the alley she had just passed she turned to yell for Aden, but he was gone. She saw the edge of his foot disappear down an alley. Haley ran for the alley and was met with a high wall of a dead end. She turned around looking for another way out. Oh no! Was she seeing things again? Did Aden even come down here? Or was he an apperation. No, he was the whole reason she had started seeing things and she was going to find him and some answers. Haley crept forward and started feeling the wall, maybe there was a secret passage? "Why did you follow me Haley?" A low voice said from the mouth of the alley. Haley gasped and turned around to face Aden. "I need to talk to you." Haley said as she walked towards him. "About what happened the other day." "I told you not to ask!" he growled. Haley stopped advancing, she had never seen him this nervous. He kept looking behind his back and checking his watch and glaring at her. "How could I not ask Aden? I've been losing my mind! I saw you glow for Pete's sake!" Haley could feel herself losing it, and she took a few calming breaths. "I just need you to tell me I'm not crazy please!" She said softer. Aden looked at her for a moment, his face softening, "Did you say you saw me glow?" he asked. Haley nodded her head. "Are you sure that what you saw? I mean, we were watching a slide show, maybe you just saw it reflect off of something and it made it look like I was glowing." His voice was softer now, and Haley could see now how she had been mistaken. Of course he hadn't been glowing! She had just let her apprehensions about him cloud her better judgement. In fact, she now felt stupid and stalkerish. At least he wasn't making fun of her like most boys would. "Oh gosh Aden! I'm so sorry I must have sounded like a complete crazy person. I have no idea what got into me!" Haley said apologetically. "Yeah, yeah no problem." Aden said distractedly. He was looking over his shoulder more often now and checking his watch more frequently. "You really should go home." he said grabbing her arm "Like, right now!" Haley drew back. No matter how cute, she did not like boys manhandling her! And the sooner Aden learned that lesson the better. "I will, but I don't need you to drag me there." Haley said as she tried to pull her arm away from him, but it was impossible. If anything his grip seemed to be getting stronger by the second. "Aw, crap!" Aden said. "What?" Haley asked. Aden turned to her with a pleading look in his eyes. "I'm sorry, but please don't freak out." He pleaded as the moon rose over the horizon.
Haley sat outside the school waiting for him. Aden had been in there for hours, and it was starting to get dark. She shouldn't bee here. She got up and started to walk home. When she turned the corner she saw him there in front of her. Impossible! Haley opened her mouth to yell at him, but stopped. Something in her wanted to follow him. So she stayed a couple of steps behind him the whole way through town and into a part of town that made her uncomfortable. Dark alleys lined these streets and the old buildings were covered with graffiti. When she thought she saw someone lurking in the alley she had just passed she turned to yell for Aden, but he was gone. She saw the edge of his foot disappear down an alley. Haley ran for the alley and was met with a high wall of a dead end. She turned around looking for another way out. Oh no! Was she seeing things again? Did Aden even come down here? Or was he an apperation. No, he was the whole reason she had started seeing things and she was going to find him and some answers. Haley crept forward and started feeling the wall, maybe there was a secret passage? "Why did you follow me Haley?" A low voice said from the mouth of the alley. Haley gasped and turned around to face Aden. "I need to talk to you." Haley said as she walked towards him. "About what happened the other day." "I told you not to ask!" he growled. Haley stopped advancing, she had never seen him this nervous. He kept looking behind his back and checking his watch and glaring at her. "How could I not ask Aden? I've been losing my mind! I saw you glow for Pete's sake!" Haley could feel herself losing it, and she took a few calming breaths. "I just need you to tell me I'm not crazy please!" She said softer. Aden looked at her for a moment, his face softening, "Did you say you saw me glow?" he asked. Haley nodded her head. "Are you sure that what you saw? I mean, we were watching a slide show, maybe you just saw it reflect off of something and it made it look like I was glowing." His voice was softer now, and Haley could see now how she had been mistaken. Of course he hadn't been glowing! She had just let her apprehensions about him cloud her better judgement. In fact, she now felt stupid and stalkerish. At least he wasn't making fun of her like most boys would. "Oh gosh Aden! I'm so sorry I must have sounded like a complete crazy person. I have no idea what got into me!" Haley said apologetically. "Yeah, yeah no problem." Aden said distractedly. He was looking over his shoulder more often now and checking his watch more frequently. "You really should go home." he said grabbing her arm "Like, right now!" Haley drew back. No matter how cute, she did not like boys manhandling her! And the sooner Aden learned that lesson the better. "I will, but I don't need you to drag me there." Haley said as she tried to pull her arm away from him, but it was impossible. If anything his grip seemed to be getting stronger by the second. "Aw, crap!" Aden said. "What?" Haley asked. Aden turned to her with a pleading look in his eyes. "I'm sorry, but please don't freak out." He pleaded as the moon rose over the horizon.
Sunday, February 12, 2012
Blog Post #18: The End! (Finallly! :)
Continuation of Blog Post #17
Boy knew he was in a dream. He knew it because she was there, and she was dead. "How are you here?" he murmured into her hair. She pulled back with a sigh and looked sadly into his eyes. "I'm not." she said with unshed tears in her eyes. "What do you mean?!" he cried feeling like his heart was being ripped to pieces. "I shouldn't be here," she said to herself and began to turn away. "It's just hurting you." She walked a few steps before he got ahold of himself and he yelled after her "Alaina! Where the heck do you think your going?" he grabbed her arm and pulled her into him. "Stop!" She yelled, "I'm not really here, I can't do this to you!" Boy was suddenly furious. He had watched her die, and he could do nothing about it and now his subconscious had conjured up a apparition to torment him. "Fine, your not here! I'm going to leave then before I become truly crazy." He stalked away fuming when he heard her lovely voice say softly behind him. "I'm not an apparition sent by your subconscious to torment you." He turned around quickly, "How did you know what I was thinking? I had my protection up. And if your not a figment of my imagination, what are you?" Alaina sat on the ground and looked sadly up at him. "It's kinda a long story." Boy sat down next to her. "You've got till I wake up!" he said with a weak smile. Alaina sighed and began her story.
"Well, when I went a level deeper to find the names I went to a place that is beyond the Mind Field, a place where you are now." At this Boy started and looked around him to look at his surroundings, but even as he looked at them he forgot them. "Don't look to hard!" Alaina grabbed his face and turned it towards her. "If you look to hard and begin to see, you will become overwhelmed and it will break your mind. Focus on me, I am real to you so I am a focal point that you can focus on." When she knew that she had his attention again she resumed her tale. "Anyways, this is the place I came. A place, as I have learned, we all come to dream each night. This is the very beginning of thought, it's birthplace. If you stay here too long you will become a part of it." Boy interrupted her and said, "Is that what happened to you?" "Yes, in a way. You see, usually when people loose themselves to the "Dream Field", as I call it, they are no longer themselves, they are just a thought that is eventually lost in its vast expanse. But I wasn't lost. I am still me." "How is that?" Boy said incredulously. "Well, I think it may have to do with the fact that I didn't loose myself. My mortal body just died while I was in the Dream Field and I stayed here fully aware of who and what I am. Actually whey I died then it became easier to exist it in the Dream Field because I am now truly a part of it." Boy turned away from her in anguish, "So you really are dead." Alaina sighed and touched is shoulder "Yes Boy, or Khitam, I am dead, but not gone. I will always be with you, But there is some thing that I need you to do for me." Khitam turned towards her, "Anything." he said. "There are others like me, my grandmother, and my uncle. I need you to find them and teach them so they understand who and what they are and have a future. I need you to bring them to me, to this spot where you buried me, so that I can teach them." "But how will I find them?" he asked, "Do not worry, I will send you to them." Boy began to feel the edges of the dream fall apart and he knew that he was going to wake up. But he couldn't! He had to stay with Alaina! "Be brave, love. I will be here." she whispered
Boy woke up under the same tree next to her grave. But he felt calm. She was with him, and always would be. He stood up with renewed confidence. He would go and make sure that this would never happen to anyone else again. He had his purpose, and so did she.
Sunday, February 5, 2012
Blog Post #17: Aftermath
Continuation of Blog Post #16
Queen Ayla had her work cut out for her. Her kingdom had been nonexistent for at least sixteen years and people were still recovering from the effects from the Burglar King. Some people, like herself, had little or no lingering effect from the whole ordeal. But others were bedridden with horrible headaches or loss of control of their bodies. The King, being one of those with a crippling headache, told her to take care of the kingdom until he was well. But she wasn't worried so much about the kingdom. Sure people needed food, and houses needed repair after years of no use, and every thing, really every thing was in great need of a good cleaning. No, the thing that worried her most was her son. The day that they had been freed he had stayed and helped everyone get back on their feet and then he had took the body of the girl and disappeared. Before he had left he had told the story of how she and the King had sent an envelope with connection sand to a place rumored to be Cecily the Great's home before they had been taken. He told of how that sand had been found by Alaina, the dead girl, and she had come to their aid when she was ready, without even knowing what she would face. He said she was brave, and a true hero, and the only reason we were all still alive today. Queen Ayla was sure his story was true, but she could tell he had left many details missing. She remembered how he had sobbed over her still form when she had first encountered him, the broken look on his face. When he disappeared, Ayla had a manservant sent after him. But he returned not knowing why he had left. She then knew that he wanted to be alone, she only could hope that he was safe and would soon come home.
Khitam sat underneath a great oak tree next to a freshly dug grave. So many thing had happened in the last couple of weeks that the whole while he had been Khitam, prince of the realm of the Forest. As he sat by the fresh dirt though, he was Boy, best friend and lover of Alaina. She was dead. She left him. It tore him apart every day to know that he did this. Why couldn't he have taken care of the Burglar King himself? Why did he ever have to get her involved? This was all his fault and now she was gone, forever. The most amazing intelligent girl he had ever known. The worst part was, was that he would have to go on with his life, and soon. He was a prince and he had duties. Never he thought I'll never go back, I've caused too much damage to my own heart. I will sit here next to her until I die. He leaned his head back against the tree and fell asleep.
Queen Ayla had her work cut out for her. Her kingdom had been nonexistent for at least sixteen years and people were still recovering from the effects from the Burglar King. Some people, like herself, had little or no lingering effect from the whole ordeal. But others were bedridden with horrible headaches or loss of control of their bodies. The King, being one of those with a crippling headache, told her to take care of the kingdom until he was well. But she wasn't worried so much about the kingdom. Sure people needed food, and houses needed repair after years of no use, and every thing, really every thing was in great need of a good cleaning. No, the thing that worried her most was her son. The day that they had been freed he had stayed and helped everyone get back on their feet and then he had took the body of the girl and disappeared. Before he had left he had told the story of how she and the King had sent an envelope with connection sand to a place rumored to be Cecily the Great's home before they had been taken. He told of how that sand had been found by Alaina, the dead girl, and she had come to their aid when she was ready, without even knowing what she would face. He said she was brave, and a true hero, and the only reason we were all still alive today. Queen Ayla was sure his story was true, but she could tell he had left many details missing. She remembered how he had sobbed over her still form when she had first encountered him, the broken look on his face. When he disappeared, Ayla had a manservant sent after him. But he returned not knowing why he had left. She then knew that he wanted to be alone, she only could hope that he was safe and would soon come home.
Khitam sat underneath a great oak tree next to a freshly dug grave. So many thing had happened in the last couple of weeks that the whole while he had been Khitam, prince of the realm of the Forest. As he sat by the fresh dirt though, he was Boy, best friend and lover of Alaina. She was dead. She left him. It tore him apart every day to know that he did this. Why couldn't he have taken care of the Burglar King himself? Why did he ever have to get her involved? This was all his fault and now she was gone, forever. The most amazing intelligent girl he had ever known. The worst part was, was that he would have to go on with his life, and soon. He was a prince and he had duties. Never he thought I'll never go back, I've caused too much damage to my own heart. I will sit here next to her until I die. He leaned his head back against the tree and fell asleep.
Sunday, January 29, 2012
Blog Post #16: Sacrifice
Continuation of Blog Post #15
Alaina was hanging to herself by a thread. She only stayed with herself because of the names. That's what they were right? She was so confused. As she concentrated on the shining lights she noticed, through the confusing haze in her mind, that they were bound by a thick, slimy, black cord. Nothing that beautiful should be bound by such and ugly thing, she thought. She reached forward and grabbed the cord. She screamed and pulled her hands away as quickly as she could. It had burned her! But in that moment of pain, she had also a moment of clarity. She remembered who she was, why she was here, and what she needed to do. It was fading fast though. She thought quickly and concluded that the cord binding the names was them being held by the Burglar King. Bracing herself to do what she had to before she lost herself again; Alaina reached out quickly and grabbed the cord again.
Hot searing pain burst through every nerve ending in her hands. It traveled up her arms and into her shoulders. Everything in her was screaming to let go! It was going to eventually reach her heart and brain making for a very long and painful end she knew. Alaina tugged even harder her efforts now tinged with desperation that only the dying posses. Every pore, every cell in her body was zinging with sharp pain. I'm going to die, She thought with resignation. Then suddenly through the pain she felt a pressure on her hand, as if someone were squeezing it anxiously. She realized deep inside her being that this presence on her hand was important to her. She channeled that feeling of power it gave her and pulled on the black cord. She felt it begin to give, but at the same time she was also starting to lose strength. With what she knew would be her very last action, she tore at the cord with the very essence of her being, and collapsed.
Queen Ayla looked around her a horrible scream resounding in her head. She was on the floor in the throne room, the floor! She stood up hastily before anyone could see her faux pas. Then she remembered what had happened. The last thing she remembered was the Burglar King ripping her name from her and her son running from the room. "Khitam!" She yelled. Then she heard the sobbing from across the room. "No, no, no!" It was a man's voice. Ayla walked cautiously around the corner. There was a man with his back to her crying over the still form of a young girl with brown golden hair and porcelain skin that was too white for living. "Excuse me," The queen said politely, aware of how delicate of a situation this was. The man turned around and the queen just about fainted. "Khitam?" she said breathlessly as she used the wall to hold herself up. "Mother?" he said through his tears. "She did it!" he said ecstatically "Oh, she did it." he said much more somber as he looked back at the still form of the girl on the floor. "What? What is going on Khitam?" She said as she knelt next to her son that she didn't recognize anymore. "Whats going on?" he responded "Well, I love her Mother" he said gesturing to the girl "And she saved all of us."
Alaina was hanging to herself by a thread. She only stayed with herself because of the names. That's what they were right? She was so confused. As she concentrated on the shining lights she noticed, through the confusing haze in her mind, that they were bound by a thick, slimy, black cord. Nothing that beautiful should be bound by such and ugly thing, she thought. She reached forward and grabbed the cord. She screamed and pulled her hands away as quickly as she could. It had burned her! But in that moment of pain, she had also a moment of clarity. She remembered who she was, why she was here, and what she needed to do. It was fading fast though. She thought quickly and concluded that the cord binding the names was them being held by the Burglar King. Bracing herself to do what she had to before she lost herself again; Alaina reached out quickly and grabbed the cord again.
Hot searing pain burst through every nerve ending in her hands. It traveled up her arms and into her shoulders. Everything in her was screaming to let go! It was going to eventually reach her heart and brain making for a very long and painful end she knew. Alaina tugged even harder her efforts now tinged with desperation that only the dying posses. Every pore, every cell in her body was zinging with sharp pain. I'm going to die, She thought with resignation. Then suddenly through the pain she felt a pressure on her hand, as if someone were squeezing it anxiously. She realized deep inside her being that this presence on her hand was important to her. She channeled that feeling of power it gave her and pulled on the black cord. She felt it begin to give, but at the same time she was also starting to lose strength. With what she knew would be her very last action, she tore at the cord with the very essence of her being, and collapsed.
Queen Ayla looked around her a horrible scream resounding in her head. She was on the floor in the throne room, the floor! She stood up hastily before anyone could see her faux pas. Then she remembered what had happened. The last thing she remembered was the Burglar King ripping her name from her and her son running from the room. "Khitam!" She yelled. Then she heard the sobbing from across the room. "No, no, no!" It was a man's voice. Ayla walked cautiously around the corner. There was a man with his back to her crying over the still form of a young girl with brown golden hair and porcelain skin that was too white for living. "Excuse me," The queen said politely, aware of how delicate of a situation this was. The man turned around and the queen just about fainted. "Khitam?" she said breathlessly as she used the wall to hold herself up. "Mother?" he said through his tears. "She did it!" he said ecstatically "Oh, she did it." he said much more somber as he looked back at the still form of the girl on the floor. "What? What is going on Khitam?" She said as she knelt next to her son that she didn't recognize anymore. "Whats going on?" he responded "Well, I love her Mother" he said gesturing to the girl "And she saved all of us."
Sunday, January 22, 2012
Blog Post #15: Beyond the Mind Field
Continuation of Blog Post #14
Alaina thought of all the people who needed her, her father, her grandmother, Boy's parents, all the people of Boy's kingdom, and Boy himself. With all of the people she loved in mind she sent out a psychic blast that knocked the Burglar King off his feet. She grabbed Boy's hand and began to run. "Where are we going?" He asked. "To the throne room where the names are!" she answered as a castle rose up in the distance, "Trust me, I have a plan!" They ran together up the stairs to the doors that were guarded by two towering knights. "Are they real?" Alaina asked Boy. "No, they are astral projections that he has created, so in a way, they are the Burglar King." "Good." Alaina replied as a sword appeared in her hand. She went up to the first knight and ran him through with her sword, and he dissolved into nothing. She looked over her shoulder to see that Boy had taken care of the other knight and they both turned in tandem and pushed the doors open.
Inside of the castle was the most confusing layout Alaina had ever seen. "How in the world are we supposed to traverse this?" she said looking at the upside down staircases and the staircases that lead to nowhere. "I have no idea!" Boy replied. "Well then we just wait for the Burglar King to come and get us?" Alaina yelled getting frustrated, her whole plan centered on getting to the throne room. "Wait, I think I have an idea!" Boy said, "Can you reach out with your mind and see if you can feel the names and lead us to them?" "But I'm already out of my mind! How can I reach out again?" Alaina said. "I have no idea but you have to try!" Boy said grasping her hand anxiously. "But what if I can't come back?" She said worried. "Alaina," Boy said looking straight into her eyes, "If we don't try, you won't come back anyway!" She finally got his point and replied,"Boy, I need you to hold onto my hand and don't let go no matter what." She knew that she could feel the pressure of his hand anywhere and would always know how to come back to it. "I promise I will never let go." he said and with that Alaina closed her eyes and searched for the missing names.
It was nothing like the Mind Field. The Mind Field had order and had rules and was a place that, even if it was something she never would have thought possible to exist, it had logic. Where she was now was simply raw instinct, no rules and almost empty. It was the very basic and genesis of thought. It scared her senseless. She knew that if she stayed her too long she would loose herself to the animalistic way of thinking this place inspired. She found it difficult to remember why she was here; what she needed to do. Names! She thought. Names, names, names! She thought it over and over like a chant inside her head to keep her sane, and on task. She drifted towards a glimmer that she thought she saw in the distance. The glimmer grew stronger and stronger the closer she came. She knew it was what she was looking for. As she drew nearer it grew so bright it was like a mini sun composed of million of tiny individual stars. She knew she had found what she was looking for, names. But while she had been so focused on her goal of finding the names, she could no longer remember anything else that she was supposed to do, and soon she felt herself succumbing to the wiles of the place beyond the Mind Field.
Alaina thought of all the people who needed her, her father, her grandmother, Boy's parents, all the people of Boy's kingdom, and Boy himself. With all of the people she loved in mind she sent out a psychic blast that knocked the Burglar King off his feet. She grabbed Boy's hand and began to run. "Where are we going?" He asked. "To the throne room where the names are!" she answered as a castle rose up in the distance, "Trust me, I have a plan!" They ran together up the stairs to the doors that were guarded by two towering knights. "Are they real?" Alaina asked Boy. "No, they are astral projections that he has created, so in a way, they are the Burglar King." "Good." Alaina replied as a sword appeared in her hand. She went up to the first knight and ran him through with her sword, and he dissolved into nothing. She looked over her shoulder to see that Boy had taken care of the other knight and they both turned in tandem and pushed the doors open.
Inside of the castle was the most confusing layout Alaina had ever seen. "How in the world are we supposed to traverse this?" she said looking at the upside down staircases and the staircases that lead to nowhere. "I have no idea!" Boy replied. "Well then we just wait for the Burglar King to come and get us?" Alaina yelled getting frustrated, her whole plan centered on getting to the throne room. "Wait, I think I have an idea!" Boy said, "Can you reach out with your mind and see if you can feel the names and lead us to them?" "But I'm already out of my mind! How can I reach out again?" Alaina said. "I have no idea but you have to try!" Boy said grasping her hand anxiously. "But what if I can't come back?" She said worried. "Alaina," Boy said looking straight into her eyes, "If we don't try, you won't come back anyway!" She finally got his point and replied,"Boy, I need you to hold onto my hand and don't let go no matter what." She knew that she could feel the pressure of his hand anywhere and would always know how to come back to it. "I promise I will never let go." he said and with that Alaina closed her eyes and searched for the missing names.
It was nothing like the Mind Field. The Mind Field had order and had rules and was a place that, even if it was something she never would have thought possible to exist, it had logic. Where she was now was simply raw instinct, no rules and almost empty. It was the very basic and genesis of thought. It scared her senseless. She knew that if she stayed her too long she would loose herself to the animalistic way of thinking this place inspired. She found it difficult to remember why she was here; what she needed to do. Names! She thought. Names, names, names! She thought it over and over like a chant inside her head to keep her sane, and on task. She drifted towards a glimmer that she thought she saw in the distance. The glimmer grew stronger and stronger the closer she came. She knew it was what she was looking for. As she drew nearer it grew so bright it was like a mini sun composed of million of tiny individual stars. She knew she had found what she was looking for, names. But while she had been so focused on her goal of finding the names, she could no longer remember anything else that she was supposed to do, and soon she felt herself succumbing to the wiles of the place beyond the Mind Field.
Sunday, December 18, 2011
Blog Post #14: Confrontation
Alaina and Boy walked together until they reached a door. "Are you sure you're ready?" she asked him, really just trying to fill the scared silence that had fallen between them. "No," he said, "But whatever happens, I want you to know, he will get into your mind and reveal secrets that you never wanted to see the light. Whatever he finds, just know that I love you and you have to trust me if we are going to get out of this alive." "Of course I trust you Boy," Alaina answered "You can't have that bad of secrets, can you?" She turned to face him “Can you?” she asked incredulously. Boy sighed and said "You just need to trust me no matter what." Disconcerted Alaina turned away and they resumed walking. They came to the door. On the other side waited their enemy, Alaina’s Uncle, the source of long years of suffering on both their parts. Boy reached forward and opened the door.
A loud booming laugh shook everything as they stepped through the door. "So my brave little niece has come back to try and defeat me! How cute! Oh, and what’s this? She brought along her little boyfriend!" An astral projection of a man stood in front of Boy and Alaina. He was tall and striking, and he had her mother’s eyes and cheek bones, but that was where the similarities ended. The man had a wild tangled mass of blonde hair, and he wore all black save for a skull that he wore around his waist on a belt. His collar went up above his ears, and his eyes were full of madness and broken images. "Well, I guess you will die together, I admit I will enjoy watching you tear each other apart." He said. "I would not be so sure of victory!" shouted Alaina. The similarities to her mother on this monster had shaken her. "Oh?" said the Burglar King, "And why is that, little one? Do you really think you can defeat me? I am the second generation of Cecily the Sorceress, you are the third, and of my pathetic sister! The girl had no back bone, only went to the Mind Field once in her life time and it scared her so bad that she never went back! What in the world to you think you can do?” He said with scorn. It seemed that he got larger with every word that he spoke until he looked down upon the couple from several feet up. “It is not about what I can do, dear uncle” Alaina said much more calmly than she felt as she reached for Boy’s hand for comfort. She squeezed his hand to tell him that it was nigh time that they attacked and got this whole business over with. She contacted him with her mind and they began the countdown. Five, “It really depends,” Four, Three, “On others, “ Two, “And what I must do, for them” One!
A loud booming laugh shook everything as they stepped through the door. "So my brave little niece has come back to try and defeat me! How cute! Oh, and what’s this? She brought along her little boyfriend!" An astral projection of a man stood in front of Boy and Alaina. He was tall and striking, and he had her mother’s eyes and cheek bones, but that was where the similarities ended. The man had a wild tangled mass of blonde hair, and he wore all black save for a skull that he wore around his waist on a belt. His collar went up above his ears, and his eyes were full of madness and broken images. "Well, I guess you will die together, I admit I will enjoy watching you tear each other apart." He said. "I would not be so sure of victory!" shouted Alaina. The similarities to her mother on this monster had shaken her. "Oh?" said the Burglar King, "And why is that, little one? Do you really think you can defeat me? I am the second generation of Cecily the Sorceress, you are the third, and of my pathetic sister! The girl had no back bone, only went to the Mind Field once in her life time and it scared her so bad that she never went back! What in the world to you think you can do?” He said with scorn. It seemed that he got larger with every word that he spoke until he looked down upon the couple from several feet up. “It is not about what I can do, dear uncle” Alaina said much more calmly than she felt as she reached for Boy’s hand for comfort. She squeezed his hand to tell him that it was nigh time that they attacked and got this whole business over with. She contacted him with her mind and they began the countdown. Five, “It really depends,” Four, Three, “On others, “ Two, “And what I must do, for them” One!
Sunday, December 11, 2011
Blog Post #13: Confessions
Continuation of Blog Post #12
Boy, it's you! Alaina thought. Its always been you! You are the one who gives me power, you are the one I need! Hearing this Boy retreated and pulled his consciousness from hers in their complete submission to each other. "What are you talking about?" He asked looking bewildered. "There is no possible way unless..." he stopped his face reddening. Alaina saw that he would not accept this unless she confessed it out loud. "Boy, you remember the stories my Grandmother told me right?" She asked him. "Of course I do, I just brought them up remember?" he snapped feeling edgy. Alaina stepped towards his turned back. "Well," She said softly, "Do you remember the most powerful force there ever was in any of those stories?" she said getting closer. He didn't answer, his back was tense. Alaina reached out to his mind, craving the closeness that they shared just a few moments ago, and trying not to lose her nerve to tell him what she felt. She reached his mind and was met by a hard, high brick wall enclosing his consciousness. Alaina searched for a chink in his armor to get through to him. As if this wasn't hard enough already, now he was resisting her failed attempts to tell him how she feels.
Finally Alaina found a hole in the mortar between the bricks of his wall. She whispered through it, "The most powerful force was always..." She stopped suddenly terrified of her own feelings. What if she had interpreted them wrong? What if it was just a heat of the moment sort of feeling? Suddenly a strange warmth radiated all throughout her body emanating from her heart and she knew that what she felt was true. She pressed on with her message with courage in her words. "The most powerful force was always love, Boy. I am in love with you." she whispered through into his mind. The wall around his mind suddenly and instantly disappeared and she was engulfed by him, psychically and physically. She saw how he had listened to her all these years, how he had come to love the sound of her voice. How though he had never seen her he thought she was beautiful, and how he would cry when bad things happened to her and he could do nothing to help her but give her comforting words. How he thought he would go crazy if he did not see her face, or hold her hand. The truth was he had loved her for his whole life. And knowing that she returned his love was the greatest moment in his whole life. There is nothing we cannot do, together. I love you Alaina. he whispered. "Well then," Alaina said out loud, pulling back from him a little. "Do you think we should go take down the Burglar King now?" she said with a smile. "Definitely!" Boy said esthetically "But first," he leaned down and kissed her. He pulled back and smiled in her breathless face "Just in case!"
Sunday, December 4, 2011
Blog Post #12: Power
Continuation of Blog Post #11
"Well what should we do?" Boy said turning to her "I'm gonna wait for a little to see if anyone else shows up." Alaina said, peeved. "Come on, Alaina! We have a more important problem than your messed up family!" Boy said trying to get some sense through to her. "Right, right. Well all we have to do is find what gives me power, easy!" Alaina said sarcastically. "We can do this, Alaina!" Boy said empathetically. "Listen to me, ever since I first talked to you, I knew you were powerful and special. Seeing what you have done in the short time you were here just proves it! Remember when you used to tell me the stories that your Grandmother told you? The ones about the heroes and quests and saving the day and adventures? I know I remember. I also remember you telling me that you wanted your own adventure and how I would be your first choice to come with! Alaina! This is it, this is your adventure!" "I know!" Alaina shouted back, "but think how I feel! All I've known all my life is ordinary! I always knew that I would never really get an adventure and I knew that Grandmother's stories were, just that, stories!" She turned away from him to hide what she was really feeling. Because the truth of the matter was, Alaina was scared. Sure she had a less normal life than the average child, but she really was not ready for all of this. Most of all she doubted herself. She did not know a thing about the mind field and her two most beloved people in her life had just abandoned her to deal with her most difficult challenge by herself!
I know how you feel. She heard Boy's voice inside her head. She became completely mortified as she realized Boy had heard her innermost fears because in her emotion she had forgotten to block her mind from him, with their close proximity they were almost always privy to each other's thoughts. "I can't believe you would listen in on my thoughts like that!" she said turning towards him "It's not like I had a choice!" he said " you were practically throwing the thoughts into my head!" Alaina turned away again, her entire frame shaking with embarrassment and anger. She felt Boy come up behind her and whisper in her ear. "I truly am sorry." he said sincerely "But, I really do understand. I grew up as a prince, with almost everything done for me. My world changed almost completely overnight. I lost everything, my friends, my teachers, and...." he paused, "and my parents. I know how it feel to be a lone and to have so much responsibility thrust upon you when you know you aren't ready. But you must know that you are ready. You know why?" he asked her, then he slid into her mind. Because you are not alone. Alaina felt Boy completely. He was every where. It scared her. But she felt his fear as well and was soon comforted by his presence and slid into his mind. They became one being and were completely open. That is when Alaina realized she had already found what made her strong, what gave her power.
Sunday, November 27, 2011
Blog Post #12: Cecily the Sorceress
Continuation of Blog Post #11
"Grandmother?!" Alaina said, "How did you get here? You knew about this place to? Did mother? Did everyone but me?" She was getting frustrated. Next to her Boy was muttering something under his breath. "It can't be, she was a fable. She can't exist." "Oh I assure you dear boy, I exist, I am Alaina's Grandmother." she said " Oh! Beg your pardon madame, it's just I thought for a moment, you looked exactly like..... never mind." Boy stuttered, blushed and looked away. "Exactly like what? Like Cecily?" Her Grandmother said. When she said this Boy's head snapped up sharply. "Yes, you are her aren't you?" he said getting excited. "Oh Alaina we're saved! Cecily is the most powerful mind ever, she can defeat the Burglar King!" "What in the world are you talking about? This is my grandmother, I have no idea who Cecily is!" Alaina said thoroughly confused. "Alaina dear, do not yell at the poor boy. He is right, and so are you." she quickly added at Alaina's astounded look. "You see dear, Although I have never journeyed to the Forest physically, mentally, this is my second home!"
"What do you mean your second home?" Alaina asked " Well, back when I was younger," her Grandmother started "I was at a fair when a old gypsy beckoned me over, she said that I had a young strong mind, and would I like to learn to use it to its full potential? I agreed and she began to teach me. She taught me a bout the Mind Field and about Astral Strands and how to follow them to other places. I grasped each concept with ease and was progressing quickly, too quickly. My teacher said I had great power but it would get out of control, so she set a spell on me to harness my power. The spell was the last thing she did, she was old and it took all of her to complete it. I loved my teacher and grieved her death, but the spell she put on me did not do exactly what she wanted it to do. It allowed me a complete understanding of everything in the Mind Field. So I was all powerful and in no danger of getting out of control. I began to wander the Mind Field a lot in my spare time. Even when I was pregnant with your mother and her brother. My power was passed along to them, but in unequal parts. Your mother got most of the control and limited access to the Mind Field, but your uncle got next to no control and full access to the Mind Field. He went crazy and lost his mind to the Field and one day ran into the forest and never returned. I searched for him in the Mind Field and found him several months later in this kingdom, secretly taking the names of people. I psychically contacted the King and Queen of the realm as Cecily the Sorceress and told them of the danger and how to rid themselves of it. They aprehended your uncle and I banished him to the Mind's Cradle, an inn where he could do no damage. I visited the King and Queen often, and their young prince and taught them simple workings of the Mind Field. Soon when they had learned enough I withdrew and had to tell your mother the news. She was so devastated at losing her brother she made me promise to never enter the Mind Field again. So when years later you were born, I could not see if you had the gift of the Field or not, and I had no idea that your uncle had escaped, until we got the letter with your name on it. For you see in the ancient language of the Forest your name means Hope or Help. Your mother knew what it ment, her brother, or the Burglar King had escaped, but still forbade me to help. So I allowed you to take the sand and see if you could save them yourself, for you see, you are the most powerful mind of all, you just need to realize what makes you powerful."
"But Grandmother, you've beaten him before, why can't you now?" Alaina asked "The Mind Field has rules and I cannot interfere for I have already used these Astral strands to much, you must do this alone, but it is not impossible, you must find what makes you strong!" and with that she faded away and they were left alone again.
Sunday, November 20, 2011
Blog Post #11: Battle Plans
Continuation of Blog Post# 10
"Alright, we will deal with that later" said Alaina standing up "Right now we need to free all of Boy's people. Father, will you help us?" she said looking down at her father, who still sat on the ground "I will tell you what I know, but if I were to fight in my own mind, I would not make it." He said looking defeated. "The Burglar King's mind is set up like a castle, with the best defenses I've ever encountered. The names are kept in the throne room as piles of treasure and gold. You will be able to see the reflection of the trapped person in the shiny surface, instead of your own. To release them, you must either, make the Burglar King release his hold on them, this is a highly unlikely outcome my dear." " You mean to say, we cannot reason with him?" She said dismayed. " You have seen his mind, it is not one you can reason with." He responded gravely " Then what must we do?" Boy asked " You must take his very existence and bind it and throw it into the Mind Field, and make sure he has no control when you do, or he will be able to grab a cord and find his way back. But if he is bound correctly then he will float forever in the Mind Field. Then you must take each of the names out of his mind and they will automatically return to their bodies. This is all I can give you, you must figure out the rest for yourself, good luck my dear." And with that he faded and was no more.
Alaina stood staring at the spot where her father had been not just moments before for what seemed like eternity. Finally she turned towards Boy, who was watching her. "Are you all right?" He asked her. "Well, lets see. I've found out my father isn't dead, that he is a spineless fish and is trapped in his own mind, and I must save him and a whole population by defeating one of the most sick and powerful minds in the known, and apparently unknown worlds!! Oh yes, I'm quite all right." she said letting out all of her pent up frustration. "But you do not have to do it alone. I will help you Alaina, whether you want my help or not!" He said and the way he looked at her reminded her of how they had come to this white place. She blushed and looked away. Boy grabbed her face and turned her to face him. "Don't you turn away from me! You have no idea what you mean to me, and I hate seeing you so sad, I just want to keep you safe and you won't let me and it's so frustrating!! Alaina, I love you!" Alaina stared into his face in shock, then leaned forward and kissed him again. "Oh! Your first kiss!!" a voice said. Alaina broke away to see her Grandmother standing behind Boy.
Sunday, November 13, 2011
Blog Post #10: The Burglar King
Continuation of Blog Post #10
"Quite right you are Boy." Her father replied "I was one of those who were in the special circumstances to enter the Forest. When I found out where I was I was so over come with grief that I would have to wait over a month and by that time every one would assume I was dead and if I were to "come back from the dead" it would be seen as some sort of sorcery, and I would be killed. I found an inn called the Mind's Cradle" At this Boy drew a sharp intake of breath. "You went in didn't you?" he said "Yes, I had no idea the horrible history of the place. I went in and spent the night there. The next day I was approached by an old man who went by the name of Poshtër. He said that he knew the deep depression I was going through and he knew how to help me. He told me to just let him into my mind and he could ease the pain and help me find a new life. Alaina you must understand how hopeless I felt" He said in response to her look of repusion, as she knew first hand how it felt to have your mind violated. "I let him in and he completely took over, I could do nothing about it, as I had not ever encountered this before. At first I tried to fight him, but after counless mental beatings I was close to losing my sainity. So, I retreated to this little part and he has left me alone and I've grown stronger so now he could not even get in here if he wanted to."
"Father, do you have any idea what has happend? What he's done while in your body?" Alaina said to her father. "Boy's kingdom is all in the freak of a mind that this Poshtër has, all of their names. Do you know what thats like? I do! I have been on both ends of the spectrum! I have almost taken a name, and I've been seconds away from having my own tore from me! And you just sit here in the back of your OWN mind! You could have stopped this a long time ago, and come home!!" Alaina breathed heavey all of her angry words spent and leaned into Boy's shoulder, but Boy was looking at her astonished "What?" she asked "You ventured out on to the Mind Field? It took me years to go beyond the connection you and I have!" "How else did you think I got out of the cell?" She asked him "I guess I never really thought about it till now, Wait the Burglar King was taking your name and you're still here?" "Yes, something distracted him then I followed his cord to his mind and his body. Well, I guess it's your body." She said looking at her dad. "Thats impossible!" Her father said, "Much more powerful minds have not even phased him, Who could distract him?" "Or what could distract him?" Added Boy added. They all pondered the fact that the Burglar King may not be the biggest of their problems.
Sunday, November 6, 2011
Blog Post #9: Alaina's Father
Continuation of Blog Post #8
Alaina woke up looking into Boy's concerned face. "Oh!" she groaned. Her head hurt something fierce. "What in the world happened?" she asked "You don't remember?" He said looking concerned, and maybe a little relieved, "No, wait," she was starting to remember what had knocked her out, "did you, um, kiss me?" Boy blushed and didn't say anything as he helped her up. She looked around her, and saw, nothing. At all. There was just a large expanse of endless white. "Where are we Boy?" She said turning to him. "I-I have no idea." he answered her with a look of fear. She started to wander around, looking for something, she had no idea what. After what seemed for eternity she came upon a figure sitting on the ground in the distance. "Boy! Do you see him too?" she said excited "Yes!" he said. Alaina ran forward, and as she grew near to her goal she began to recognize him.
Alaina stopped abruptly. "No, no, no, no." she murmured under her breath. "It can't be possible!" Boy stopped along side her "Alaina, are you all right?" he asked her. When boy said her name the figure stiffened and turned around. Her suspicions were confirmed as she saw the face of her father once more. "Alaina?" his voice came out hoarse "It can't be, I must be hallucinating again" he turned away. Alaina broke from Boy with a cry and ran to her father. "Daddy! Daddy! Its me!" she screamed as she threw herself into his arms. He hugged her and spun her around and around "I never thought I would see you again!" He said crying into her shoulder. "Oh Daddy! What happened? Where are we? Why did you never come home?" she said, and realized that she was crying now too. Her father put her down and said "How did you get here?" he asked, and then laughed "It seems as though we have a lot of catching up to do!"
When Alaina had introduced her father to Boy, they all sat down in a circle to hear her father's tale. "To answer your first question, we are in my mind. Yes, my mind, also the mind of the one called the Burglar King. You see, we are one and the same in a way, he is in my body and I am a fugitive in my own head!" He stopped seeing the completely lost looks on Alaina and Boy's faces. "Goodness, I am no good at telling stories, I guess I should start at the beginning."
"As you know I was away at war. My commanding officer needed a scout to go ahead of the bulk of the army and chart the best way through the forest that we would need to go through. I volunteered. I was given a horse and provisions and set out that night around midnight, but it was a new moon. I'm sure you know what that means Boy" her father said looking pointedly at him. Alaina sat confused, Boy seeing her look explained. "You can only enter or exit my realm, the realm of the Forest, at midnight on a new moon, or on a solstice. Many a traveler has wandered into the realm, and the realm is connected to all great forests of the earth so we acquire many different people. Your father must be one of them!"
Sunday, October 30, 2011
Blog Post #8:Still The Same Story
Continuation of Blog Post #7
Alaina/James walked over to her door and reached for his keys. "Hey, James!" the other guard yelled "What in the world are you doing?" Alaina got nervous and had James collapse into unconsciousness. She then followed the cord to the other man, she was ready this time and slid unhampered into his mind. She had him reach down and take the keys from James and unlock her door. She had him lay down then he was unconscious too. Alaina pushed open her door and walked down the damp hallway. She came to a stair case leading up. Up was probably the best option so she started walking. Suddenly there was a voice in her head. Alaina! Are yo- The voice suddenly cut off as she threw up blocks over her mind thread. But wait, she knew that voice! Boy is that you? she slowly let down her walls Oh, Alaina, you scared me! You have been learning haven't you? He sounded scared Alaina I have to go but what ever you do, don't ever go to far, you know what I mean. And then he was gone.
His last words sent chills through her. She had already scared herself with how easily she could impose her will over others, it was not natural, but she knew that she must save every one then she would never use it again. ever. She reached the top of the stairs and fell to her knees. She grabbed her head. There was someone in there! He was snooping around sifting through her very essence the Burglar King! So that is how you steal names! You take the person's very being, but where would you put it? Alaina futilely put up walls around her mind that the Burglar King tore down mercilessly. She screamed in pain as he started to rip her essence from her mind. Fight! Fight Alaina! A voice screamed in her mind and stalled the Burglar King for a moment. In that moment Alaina launched her own attack on her assaulter. She raced along the thread to his mind, imagining calvary and footmen racing into his mind. While back in her body she followed where her mind told her the physical body of the king was. She burst into the throne room just as she reached his mind, and then she was lost.
Alaina tumbled through his chaos of a mind. It was a fractured, sick and tortured thing. The weight of all the people completely crushing his mind except the hunger for more. Alaina could feel herself losing herself, she was being dissolved in the mix of madness. She felt a hand grab hers and looked to see the Boy of the Forest. "Boy what are you doing here?!" Alaina yelled. Now they would both be lost! "I can help you!" He said, "Let me try!" "No! You are one of the last people alive that I care a bout! I can not lose you!" She screamed and pushed him away from her, back to his own mind. But he fought her and came right back. "You think I don't care about you to? I have been alone all these years, except for you! I can not lose you!" He then pushed her back to her mind. She fought back and pushed him, and he pushed back. They sat there suspended by their strength and their passion. Then at the same moment the both let go and came together and Boy pushed his lips to Alaina's and the world went white.
Sunday, October 23, 2011
Blog Post #7: Second to Last Chapter, I hope!
Continuation of Blog Post #6
As soon as the door was closed she was thrust into gloominess again. The heat behind her eyes gave her warning of the betrayal that her eyes were about to commit, and soon enough her eyes brimmed and tears made their trek across her face. Stop it! She told her self, He needs your help! She remembered the stories that her Grandmother told her when she was young and all was right with the world, "You will do great things one day," her Grandmother had told her "Just remember it's you who decides to give up or figure out how to solve the problem" With her Grandmother's words anew in her mind she looked around the cell with courage. Its gloom would not drag her down now. She sat and thought of her next move, her objective was to, primarily, get the Boy of the Forest free and get his name back. Maybe she could get his people's names back too! Oh, she could be the heroine of this story! Then her spirits fell. What did she have to use? All of the heroes in the stories had some kind of special power or help of some kind! But wait, she did have a special power! She had a mind link with the Boy of the Forest, and although she couldn't seem to reach him now there had to be another way to use this gift!
Alaina closed her eyes and concentrated on the part of her mind that she used to communicate with the Boy of the Forest. She could feel something there, almost like a thread, she followed it and she came upon millions of other threads, their numbers were overwhelming! It took her a moment to realize that they were links to other peoples minds! She could see them! And some how she knew that she could follow them into the minds of others. Suddenly she drew back into her own consciousness. The thought of entering another's mind repulsed and scared her. Who was she to invade upon someones most private and intimate space? Come now Alaina! She said to herself, How else to you expect to get out of here, and save the Boy of the Forest? She realized she had no other choice and ventured out of her mind again. Alaina followed the threads that she realized were the guards' minds out side her door. She paused at the threshold, not fully committed, took a deep breath and entered the mind of her first guard.
The information was overwhelming! His name was James Pats, he didn't want to be a guard for the burglar, but was terrified of having his name stolen. Thousands of thoughts filled Alaina's head. James's past, his family, all of the Pats' names had been stolen, his likes, his dislikes, his fears, his joys. All of it, crashing on to her so that she felt that she was drowning! She was losing herself, she could feel it. She tried to imagine a solid rock wall at least a meter thick blocking all of the information, and it stopped. She was free of the constant torrent of thoughts! She could now hear his present thoughts and was relieved to find that he had no idea that she was there. Now, to get herself free!
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